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Wow. You are very, very talented at that! I love how you are showing us every step of the way... all of your progress... keep it up! Also, I like ...

Peanut here! I haven't seen you around YWS much... because you are a new member xD! Welcome to your 2nd home! The old man awoke with a small gasp. I ...

Huzzah! *applause* :D

Like we all didn't know it was coming... :lol: June, you rock, and thanks for answering all of my questions without a doubt... and for telling me not to apologize ...

Banned for not understanding his signature Even though I don't either :lol:

You get a reply! -inserts coin-

Ellipses are these... those three periods in a row... I use them all the time! And, since I only wanted to tell you that, I won't interrupt your TPBM. Here; ...

5/10 ... I would ease up on the whole *Twilight* theme... not that I mind, for I loved that book, but it's a little overwhelming. Add some of you in ...

Hi! I'm here to review... quite a bit after I said I would. :oops: sorry about that. he said not unkindly. There should be a comma after 'said'. Hmm... I ...

If...you can call what we had "friendship" that is. I bit of an awkward sentence... try rearranging the wording a little. What does it matter at this point what I ...

Hey! I'm Peanut- I don't think I have ever critiqued you before! Well, there is a first time for everything :) Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:11 am Post subject: ...

Hmm... this poem seemed a little... what is the word?... flat. You start the same way each time (which I know is your main point, but it seems a little ...

Then the clanking of each metal bar. I would get rid of the 'then' at the beginning of that sentence :) A gentle fog approaches, But you keep walking. Even ...