peanutgallery007

You asked me to tear this apart. How could I? There is so little to critique, because everyone beat me here, and this is just a wonderful story in itself! ...

Yeah, I hate the size restrictions. I wanted to use a picture I had taken for my avatar, but they are all too big. :( Anyway, hi! Welcome aboard :D ...

OK lets get started 8) . First of all, you can ease up on the periods at the end. They aren't needed for every single ending... try connecting a few ...

Everyone else= pointed out what was wrong before me. Me= compliments. Compliments= :D:):P :shock: 8) :lol: :oops: :wink: :idea: :smt049 :smt050 :smt041 :smt040 :smt036 :smt016 :thud: Wonderful job! We

Oh my God, it's wonderful! I only noticed her lips are in a certain way that seems a little funky to me... if you made them that way, that's fine, ...

First of all, I would just like to congratulate you on writing this wonderful poem. I absolutely loved it, for it was beautiful, and I loved your description and expressions ...

:D I would change a couple of things. First of all, your rhythm is very inconsistent, so it seems. The line breaks are what does it, I'm pretty sure. It ...

I got all thirty finished! :D It was hard!!! But! I made it through! I was really, really forgetful sometimes though. I forgot to post everyday, but, in my defense, ...

OK, here are the last ones! Thank God I finished :D:D:D:D:D:D:D :P 4/25 I write with a steady hand no matter what it is even if I shouldn't. The truth ...

Actually, to put someone to death for a crime is roughly 2 million- 5 million dollars. That is, roughly, 2 million more than it would cost to put them in ...

Yola! Joined this group a while back, but I haven't really looked at it until today... hehe, sorry about that. Anyway! I need a partner *runs to the Need A ...

1. 2. Peanutgallery's NaPoWriMo thread 3. Just my collection of poetry for the month... some of them are really good, I think, and some are pretty pathetic, but I would ...

All finished! Keep 'em comin' ;)

Erm... this sounds a whole lot like the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. That isn't bad but I would put it in FanFic instead. Oh, by the way, the form ...

Oops, I forgot. Here is my kitty also! She sleeps with me every night and she is so pretty. :) Sorry about stretching the page and the brightness and blurriness; ...