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Re: June!
I totally agree, Evi. I'm sorry. I just thought it would be nice. Again, you're totally right, you guys. All YWS' ers rock, and deserve to be mentioned. But... I ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Review Gallery
Anyone else? Your review is my to- do! Don't be shy, step up for a try! It's all free, so come ask me! Please don't worry, I'll get it done ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: The War
Hello! I'm Peanut. Nice to meet you! :P Your capitalization is... interesting, to say the least. In some lines, there was capitalization right in the middle, for no reason... not ...
May 5, 2009 -
Re: June!
OK, we all know June is awesome ;) . But! She doesn't believe it! Let's tell her just how awesome we think she is and why :D I thought we ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Summer's Music
Thank guys! It probably took you a while to do those reviews... thanks for taking time out of your schedule! :D I needed it :lol:
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Shady Debate
Thank you guys! *hugs* I needed those reviews :P
May 4, 2009 -
Re: No Match
Thank you all so much for your thoughts, nit- picks, and reviews! I enjoy getting help with my poetry, because it needs it, hehe. :oops:
May 4, 2009 -
Re: New Generation
Thank you all so much for your thoughts, nit- picks, and reviews! I enjoy getting help with my poetry, because it needs it, hehe. :oops:
May 4, 2009 -
Re: My Who Guillotine
Thank you all so much for your thoughts, nit- picks, and reviews! I enjoy getting help with my poetry, because it needs it, hehe. :oops:
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Fearless Battle with Imprudence
Thank you all so much for your thoughts, nit- picks, and reviews! I enjoy getting help with my poetry, because it needs it, hehe. :oops:
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Life
I would re- write the first sentence; ‘Let’s not forget who we are and what we’re actually here for…’, my grandfather posed to me in his reassuring intelligent tone on ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Inspiration....
Hiya! I'm Peanut. I love poetry, and reviewing it, so, here I be! :P nit- picks When you're at the top, With nothing to lose.. Dont let your gaurd down, ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Silken Chants
Over- all ; excellent rhythm, topic, and fluency. Truly a masterpiece! Nit- picks ; I think I only have two little nit- picks this time; Of the sights of abstract ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Fear
Hiya! Nice to meet you! ~Peanut OK, lets have a few sections of criticism; Over- all It was way too short. Please consider expanding the over- all length of the ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Review Gallery
You are an absolutely amazing writer Meep. The true stories are almost always the best. I did as well as I could with your story :) . It made it ...
May 2, 2009