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You’re smooth and velvety like a peach On the outside I think this would do better being; "You're as smooth and velvety as a peach; on the outside" I think ...

You sound so much like me. I love the country too... though I can't live the life you are because we can't afford it. I really hope we get to ...

Nope! I've wondered about that plenty of times; what difference does it actually make if it is capitalized or not? It doesn't do anything really... But! It is officially grammatically ...

Hiya! I'm April, here to review! :P Who am I if I never know love? If I roam the earth and never go home? If I drink, though never calm ...

banned for having a war without me :roll:

and i'm a huge fan of indie rock music. i've been writing since i was nine, been published in teen ink. Wow! Congrats! You have also been writing for a ...

Hi there, Carino! I'm April. Nice to meetcha! :D OK, so you might be wondering why you are seeing in different colors... don't worry, it's not you ;) . Here ...

Wonderful poetry, hon! The rhyme scheme sounds perfectly natural. You are a rhyming pro! The only little flaws I found were these; The hearts of Greatness I will see. Greatness ...

Hiya Nikkiiee! I'm April; nice to meet you! OK, before we say anything else, I had better lay down the YWS ground rules; :arrow: OK, first of all, no chat ...

:o your user name couldn't possibly have anything to do with a song by Linkin Park, could it? I will be very surprised if it does! I love that song! ...

Hi there! I love your poem; the description was awesome. Now, onto the actual review; I saw that you didn't have much capitalization. The punctuation was OK, but if you ...

Can I has one? Pweeeease? Me wants my name in foam! :D ~April

OK, here's the deal. The media makes it seem like we are all going to die, just by, in itself, using the word "pandemic". When treated, swine flu isn't actually ...

Hiya! Nice to meet you! I'm April. It's wonderful getting new members to YWS! I'm pretty social too... though I always hope it doesn't annoy the newcomers :) . Anyway! ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm April. Nice to meet you! you purposely ignore me knowing i can't go a day without speaking to you . I think "purposely" should ...