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I think the only little things I found that I thought was wrong were these; how you started every single sentence with "remember" and the imagery. OK, I know it ...

My absolute main thing is the shortness of it. You should definitely expand. Also, I noticed in the first and last stanza you capitalized each line, while in the middle ...

Done! Wonderful job, Sakura/ Cadmus. You did an awesome job. End of story.

Poseidon. The cause of my torment. I would replace that first period with a semi- colon, please. :) Androgeous. My son. Killed by my lover, that flawless bull of Poseidon. ...

Erm... it looks almost like you based this off of Twilight. Try making it a tiny bit more original, dear. Originality is always key. So! I liked this poem, but ...

Omg! I hate my computer, somehow my sister *Mutters about how to kill her* did something and made it auto correct the barely to barley cause she was writing or ...

You're mother language is not English? Cool! What language is your mother language? You don't have to answer, I'm just curious. :P So! Welcome. I hope you enjoy it here ...

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Yayz! I absolutely loved that book. Greek mythology books are awesome. There's another good one I just finished reading called Shadow Thieves, and that one was even better, I ...

Hello! I'm April. I thought I might as well introduce myself :P So! If you need anything, feel free to ask me! I'll help you out. Sorry, not much to ...

OK, I know in YWS there are a lot of House fans. The season just ended so I'm dying for something of House! Discussion is open! :D Discuss anything House-related ...

Hiya there Nikko! I read and reviewed your poem; it was good! :D OK, so! It seems that mhmmcolleenx0 already explained the main rules, so I will tell you about ...

Mmm... so rejuvenating. I love the truth and feeling. When writing poetry, truth is everything. I have no nit- picks (which is a once- in- a- lifetime thing.) Also, I ...

Hiya! Please keep your hands and feet in the ride at all times... :lol: I’m in love, I’m in love, I’m in love I really think that the repetition is ...

Well, hiya! I'm April. So! You said you already read the rules and guidelines. So that means you must already know about the chatspeak, 2:1 ratio, and rating rules. If ...

Hiya! Sorry, but I always feel as if I shouldn't just jump right in to the review. But you would not sully your voice with such overuse. Your brain I ...