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Re: Review Gallery
Done with yours, KitKat! Working on your second one, June ;)
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Crying Moon {2}
I came back, in the next morning. Hiya! Sorry about starting off the review with a nit- pick :oops: . OK, for this sentence, I would get rid of the ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: These little things...
nothing wrong with it except for the big words that I don't understand. :P
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Blade of Grass
Hiya Moosic! :D just look at me through your glass. I second Jon's opinion. That line is too long, and seems to slow the flow. Not good! through the rain ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Review Gallery
June> I did yours. Wonderful job! Zomg, it needs to be a book! Lemme know when you post more of it ;) Kat> I'm working on it! ^_^
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Mayflower [1]
Hiya June! I must say, as a lover of grammar, this is exceptionally well- written and revised. You're leaving me very few nit- picks to catch ;) Mayflower Center for ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Orilie Davis -- Chapter One
Hiya Jon :) OK, I found already, even in the first paragraph there is a specific style of writing you use, and that style is straight- forward. Straight forward, and ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: No one seems to read the sticky thread
Hiya! I'm in position to welcome you; I've been here about four months :P ! So... welcome! I love rock music too. Do you know the main rules of YWS? ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Hey
Actually, it's all good! :D Posting something twice happens to everyone around here, so it's common. You're completely fine. Not to mention, you can only delete a thread if no ...
May 21, 2009 -
Re: Review Gallery
Done! :D Jon; I loved that poem. Your style was awesome. Strangely new to me, yet awesome. Blot (no, not Bolt :P ); your poem was interesting! I loved your ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: A frighting night
Yola, Blot! ;) The desert lay calm, chilling under the moons angelic glow. Are you sure it should be "moons"? In this case, it really should be "moon's". Calm resonated ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Black Clouds of Renewal
Heya, Jon! I'm here, as requested ^^ Lovely poetry! I love your writing style you used. Like, how you capitalized this; It washed through towns and valleys, Taking with it ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Now, when introducing yourself, remember to smile!
Eh, I would prefer April better, but you can call me Peanut if you prefer it :P Yeah, people are really nice about writing. No worries. I sure you're great ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Now, when introducing yourself, remember to smile!
Wow! You sound a lot like me! Except, when I joined I was more like; "are these people stalkers?" Haha. I've grown out of that :P Everyone here is nice. ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: I don't know :P (and springrain chose the title, so ha!)
LoL Snoinksterz! I don't think anyone else could possibly write a better poem than that for June, xD . It's too funny and awesome. Great job! 8) ~April
May 18, 2009