Young Writers Society

Wow. Fantastic piece. I don't even have any critiques-- I just thought i'd complement you on your fine work ^_^ this deserves to be featured. I love the style and ...

I would love it if you could review my poem for me. Something seems wrong with it but the two comments it has don't really help. Thanks (:

1. Ellen Hopkins books. They really helped me with my poetry-- formatting, word choice, metaphors, similes, etc. 2. Best Young Writers and Artists of America anthology, from winners of the ...

Why hello there ^_^ It'd be fantastic if you'd review my poem for me. Something's wrong with it but I don't know what. Thanks in advance :)

Hey, so I wrote this relatively quickly (as I do with most my poems) and messed with the format a bit. I tried my best to stick to a 5-7-5-7 ...

Thank you. I agree it was pretty bare-bones, especially for poetry, so I'm going to try and flesh it out a bit. And I know the formatting is weird in ...

Hey (: I really liked this, especially the description and the rhyme scheme. Most of this rolled right off the tongue. Dark poetry like this are some of my favorites. ...

Hey (: great pics. I didn't really get the first two, and I thought there could be a little less glare, but I absolutely love the last one. (I'm not ...

I literally wrote this on a whim. It's a collection of haikus. I'm not sure if I should get rid of the last stanza or not, so let me know. ...

Reviving this thread. I accidentally created a new one (thinking this one had been deleted). Maybe a mod will come by and delete my extra one. Oh well. Any takers?

Done! great story (: And seeing as how I revived my other thread, this one should really be gone... maybe a mod will come by and delete it. I'll refer ...

Hey there! I loved it. Aside from some grammatical errors, it was nearly perfect. It kept me interested the whole way through :) However I do think yous hould fact ...

Hey (: I wanted to add something about line breaks. I guess it could go under flow, since line breaks generally direct the reader's eye. But what I wanted to ...

Hey! I thought this was a great first work, you're off to a good start. I'm a fan of your vocabulary-- it enhances your poem. First I thought I'd say ...

I've been back for about 3 days now... I left for about a year. Hopefully I can pick up my reviews again! Nice to see all this good writing again.