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Re: Hypocrite
Hey, JD. I'm gonna try to give you a review. I haven't reviewed in a while though. But here goes. your pea sized brain I'm not positive but I think ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Rooted in Defiance
I wrote this for a history project. It's about women's suffrage and women not being able to vote. I hope you like it but please be harsh(: I like harsh. ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Circle I (ii-Finn)
Stella! I'm here to help(: Although this is pretty good I don't know how much help I'll be. There are a few grammatical things but you're starting to make me ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Circle I (i-Luke)
I'm sad that I didn't see anything wrong with this...I want to be able to help you but I didn't catch anything that was obvious, so good job with that. ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Breathe (1)
I liked the fact that this makes me ask so many questions. Usually when writers do that you don't really want to know the answers because their approach is all ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: The Broken(1)
McKinley “McKinley, hello?” I look up at Cole, who had his hand in front of me, waving it around like a crazy person. I can see his cerulean eyes peeking ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Disney Drawings 2
Here are some of my drawings I've done recently. I apologize for the blurriness; my camera is pretty horrible. I don't know how good they are going to look because ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Lucky (for canislupis' contest)
Hi, Meep(: When I read this I was very interested, having researched AS before. I think you did a great job of describing what it might be like for some ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook
My spot. (and Jabber, I'm going to start counting....now...)
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Dream Catcher (old version)
But James dos not move. Typo. I was waiting to catch you for something.(: Her hair, dark like night, dark like her name, falls in glossy sheets. Long and silky, ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (Chapter 1)
I'm back! Here goes: Okay you opened up with them running and almost falling off a cliff, but some of the sequencing is strange. Stella is kissing Jack before Liza ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (Chapter 1)
Lassie, I only have time to review to the Astrix but I'm loving it so far and will be back tomorrow to finish this chapter. Here I go: walked in ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
I love how you did this, Lassie. I thought the imagery was very good for a prologue. I agree with the other reviewers that some of the sentences were a ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: My first edit of a photo
Hi, Between(: This is a really pretty picture. I think the colors are strange and I think that might be a good thing, it makes it different. The only thing, ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: YWS 6th Birthday Radio Show
I won't be at home :( But Happy Birthday YWS! And thank you Nate for creating this amazing site. Hope the radio show is awesome. ~peanut~
Nov 14, 2010
