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I think it's working okay so far but like I've said before not that much has happened. I think that it'll be useful to write it like this once the ...

Yay! Emily, details! Way to go(: I liked this much better than your other pieces (which I liked for different reasons). This one had feeling. I could feel the character, ...

Emily, it's going to be awesome when you get it all straightened out. Once you get going the grammar stuff will be less also. My dad's an English teacher and ...

Blue light falls through the window of the attic, we cross the yard and Mom’s shadow is visible above us. My shoes splatter mud against the concrete walk way, I ...

Again this goes in the order of the text. I hope this helps. A low blood sugar--? What? I think you are missing a word. You are telling us about ...

I'm so nit-picky and I'm going to apologize for this before you even get any further. I wrote these down as I read it so they should go along with ...

Jababa! You can't steal Emily from me! And yes it's the same conference(: Emily, I hope you love it on here as much as I do. As you can see ...

Emily! Hiya(: I'm going to try to review this but the others seemed to have gotten most of it. One thing I notice (or didn't notice...I guess) was that there ...

This is an essay on Romeo and Juliet. The prompt was to explain with examples whether violence begets more violence. This is due in two days so any critiques would ...

Oh how this one sucks... #3. Untitled. Words tickle your strawberry lips, Magic threatens to spill from them. A voice encased in a child’s giggling, Words enveloped in hope, A ...

Lassie! You drew my magician(: And he looks awesome. You're style shows in this. And you want to know my favorite part? His nose. I don't know why but I ...

#2. Rainfall Blacktop trails behind me, memories of what could have been flood back. Falling over me like rain, Drip drop. I pray for the chance to forget. To move ...

Here's my first poem. I have a feeling a lot of these poems will go back to my novel And The Light Fades. References to fires and seeing things (or ...

I've never done NaPo but I figure I might as well since I'm a wimp and am not doing Screnzy.. This flame will probably burn out pretty fast but I ...

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