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Re: i need help explaining things
Do any of you ever feel rushed when your writing? I think i have a problem, because when i write i feel like if i don't reveal something big people ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: angel from ashes
hey, thanks for reviewing!and swaysway i'd just like to point out that the living room didn't fall in the kitchen did. I should have mad that clearer, and Ill fix ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: angel from ashes
hey, this is peanut! This is just a rewrite of my story. Everyone said it should be longer so i made it kinda longer. okay its not that long but ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Amoung the hidden- Margret Pettersen Haddix
Hey if you liked Among the Hidden you'll probably like her new book and yes its called Found. It's the first book in the Missing series. I was really sad ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the hills-Chapter 1
Hi, I thought this was a good 1st chapter. There was only one little bitty small thing that I noticed. No-one knew where the road led. there shouldn't be a ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: angels from ashes
Hey guys thank you for the advice. The reason it seemed rushed was because it was a school project and we only had eight pages to write it. Also it ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Destinies Entwined ch.1. The story of Neil
it was a good story and i think Nutty got all the grammar mistakes. I'm just wondering why a teenage boy would stop on his way to school, when he ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: angels from ashes
I'm new and this is my first post so please, please ,please review. These parts were originally chapters but i think it would be better to just separate them with ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Contest Entry - Terrible Writing Prompts
you did great even if the prompt was terrible. i loved how you used the prospective of a four year old. the way you wrote i think any one could ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Blithe Bereavement - Prologue
hi i thought you did a great job! you have a great sense of humor. i loved the way Death felted like he would be so involved with Ebony's death ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
hi my name is Sarah but i honestly dont care what you call me peanut or sarah is just fine. i introduced this site to cat_910 but she was the ...
Oct 17, 2008
