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Re: untitled
Hi this is a rewrite of my previously posted fantasy chapter 1 thing. It has more details and I hope you enjoy! ~peanut~ ************************* Joanna looked around the vast chamber ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Getting Out
Hey cat its peanut! I finally found this one ( the one you didnt let me read at school!) It was good, I liked seeing a different side, since all ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Illusions of Life
Hi i just saw the other posts and im sure your tired of this but im about to pick this story apart. :smt064 the bold is me. [quote]// The woman ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Never Again
Awwwwwww Emmy i think im going to cry! I miss her too, good job btw! ~peanut~
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Ophelia's Death
that was good I haven't read Hamlet but have seen the movie (my dad's an English teacher). I thought that the way you wrote it even if some one read ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Mitosis Rap
Hey, cat i still like your rap lol! It hasnt gotten old yet. I just hope we dont have to do anything else like this in science. ~peanut~
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Escape from the Academy, Part 2
I read the first part and cant wait for more. Im excited to find out what is going to happen to Anya. She must be pretty important for them to ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: untitled
Thank you for all your reviews! Chosenofair i would just like to point out that they are not infront of a castle they are in a castle's dungeon, i guess ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: untitled
This is my first fantasy so bare with me. I hope its good. Enjoy!! ~peanut~ Joanna looked around the vast chamber that imprisoned her. The survivors huddled in small groups ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Pre-face - no name - story 2.
This was a good preface, but it was very short. I'd like to know more about the character. I also think that if you rearrange the last sentence and put ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Enna.
Hey, I'm Peanut and I'll be your review person this evening. Sorry I know I'm bad at this so bare with me. The story was very good. At the end ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
Hey cat! you did a great job. As you know i have already read the things you have written,but i was just wondering: does this prologue go with the other ...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: Angels from Ashes
hey, this is part one of my first chapter for Angels from Ashes. Its short but don't worry its only the first half, there will be more. enjoy!!! ~peanut~ Chapter ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Sincerely, X [Chapter 1]
Hi, Ember. I really liked your story, but i have to disagree with cat. She said that she thought the werewolves were like the ones in Twilight. I think that ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: i need help explaining things
When i said "big things" i meant like plot twists. like things happening to the main character. i have a habit of going straight to the twist and not giving ...
Oct 22, 2008
