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Hi, Pink! Here's the link to my novel. There are 2 chapters up right now (each in 2 parts) I really only need reviews on the second chapter but if ...

Hey, Micki! I'm here for a review(: Anything to help my poweranger team mate. Nitpicks: Yet I didn't mind Comma after yet. This cold hunk of metal was the only ...

Hi, Matt! Welcome to YWS(: I'm peanut or Sarah whichever is fine. I hope you are enjoying yourself. One good thing about joining right before a review day is that ...

Hi, Grandison, I'm Sarah. I haven't read the other chapters but I didn't really go into the story much, just the grammar and a few things about Evan. Nitpicks: But ...

Beckiwah! I don’t know if I’ve ever reviewed anything of yours….*thinks* Yeah nothing is popping into my head. Before I start, thank you for the torch= flashlight bit, that was ...

Hey, Stella(: I’m going to review this. I’m warning you now I didn’t read the first half, I just read the summary so I hope that’s okay. Nitpicks: Ten years ...

Eli! Sarah here to review your lovely poem(: Nitpicks: When I was small, you showed the stars -- showed me? You might want to clarify because it could be us ...

Hi, Rosey(: It's been too long since I've read any of your work. I hope this helps and I'm not just rambling. Nitpicks: Footsteps came from down the hall, slowly. ...

I’ve never reviewed lyrics but I’ve done poetry, so I guess that’s sorta the same? I’m going to try my best to help. There's just a few little things that's ...

The house is warm and I am grateful that I am here, but I can’t help but wish I was at home. Sophia is in the kitchen still, watching her ...

The banner /is/ supposed to remind me of Soviet Union, right? I'm so ready for this(: Maybe I'll even get a new star. ~peanut~

Dono, here's the first part of the second chapter of And The Light Fades(: and part 2: Thank you for everything you said about the first chapter. ~peanut~

The green paint of the walls acts like a mirror. It bounces the light onto me, forbidding me to stay in the darkness. The white of the canopy bed is ...

Please(: And there's a part two if you want to review the rest of this chapter it's here: Thank you, Dono! ~peanut~

6/10 I don't know why but I didn't really think Tangled was that good of a Disney movie. Inception. (