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Emma, this was a good piece a bit short but it showed all it needed to. I like the concept of a boy from the dungeons being important to the ...

I stood still as a statue. My nose pressed against the cold, glass above the bed; stretching on my tip toes to see outside. In front of me lightening lit ...

Fragile_heart, I thank you. I will rewrite it. I won't use your rewrite but you gave me an idea. Thanks! ~peanut~

If you like paranormal-ish mystery ( I just made that category up) I highly recommend The Blue is for Nightmares series by Laurie Stolarz. Or if you like vampire books ...

I don't normally write poetry but this was inspired by something Lin910 told me. She said that it was just common sense that people are loved because of their flaws. ...

Loveless, this was a good start. I could feel you character's emotions. I could hear the children running and laughing, hear the adults half-panicked cries of distress to stay away ...

Here is another poem, it's only my second one. Let me know what you think. A child at play leaps through the spring air. Her small fingers clawing, reaching for ...

Angel, this story was brilliant. You really developed the characters well. I could feel the emotion as I read it. You showed how alcohol can effect people and their relationships ...

Hey Rascalover, these were the few comma mistakes I found. There may be more, I'm not sure. “No , Jay, I would love to talk to you though. What the ...

Thanks April! About the whole originality thing, the truth is I didn't ever know what I was doing. I will try to take your advice and change somethings. Thank you, ...

I'm going to warn whoever might read this that I have never written poetry. This is just something I wrote using an outline my teacher handed out in class. It ...

Juney, I'm not an expert on photography, but I think you did a good job on the pictures. Most of them are of small things that are probably harder to ...

I call a spot! But I don't have time to make a profile now so I'll do it later. ~peanut~

Hi, Simply. This was your NaNo I see. I didn't find any grammar mistakes and the plot was good. I would like to see what happens to Alex at her ...

Mandeyy, this wasn't awful. It was good, but there are some things I would change. I'm going to change some things. Hopefully this will help at the end to show ...