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Hi Quill welcome to the YWS family! I read your story, obviously, and I though it was okay. I didn't really know much about your character. Is it a boy ...

Hi Sparky, I'm peanut, welcome to YWS. On here there are a lot of people who will be willing to review your work you just have to be patient and ...

Hi Justin! Welcome to YWS, I'm peanut! So you've been writing for 8 years? That's awesome. There are a few rules for the site: No chat speak we are writers ...

Hi Eddykins, I'm peanut. I can tell you're new here so welcome to YWS. This is the right forums so don't worry. When you are writing, it's important to get ...

Hi I'm peanut. So here goes. I can't really go into too much detail but from what I saw you changed you tense a lot. At the beginning it was ...

Hey, closedeyes. I'm peanut. It's great that you write what you observe or feel so you can get into your character's heads or you can imagine things more easily. YWS ...

Shina, the imagery in this story is fantastic. I could picture it clearly. But one aspect of the story confused me. If Aysel opposed of magical creatures so much that ...

I have been working on this piece for a long time. There are three more chapters so far. I hope its good. Please rip it to shreds. ~peanut~ Snow fell ...

Thanks, Teufelshund. I never thought about actually putting on a blind fold and trying to do the things I normally do. I think people, myself included, do take our eye ...

I'm currently working on a story about a 28 year old woman named Linda Clare. A year prior to the story Linda lost her daughter and husband in a car ...

I just finished Wrecked by E.R. Frank about an hour ago. I am now reading Lock and Key by Sarah Dessen. ~peanut~

Linny, as you know I hate that song. But your story showed emotion and conflict between the characters, and your plot was wonderful. I might just have to go listen ...

Happy Birthday Jane!! :birthday: *gives Jane an elephant* :elephant: ~peanut~

She sighs, pulling her dirty blonde hair out of her face. Her green eyes show annoyance. She picks her cell phone up from the ground beside her and checks the ...

Hey April! Other Fiction.(its realistic) PG Thanks, ~peanut~