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I hope not, Gale(: ~peanut~

We wait until the hearse pulls out and then follow the long black car. Police sirens squeal as we drive. They have started to drive in front of the black ...

Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 6. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 75. I kinda feel dumb because mine is the lowest on here but... ~peanut~

Splodey, you finally wrote! I knew you could do it. I don't really have that much to say about this piece. I've told you before that I love your voice, ...

Before you read this, I just want to thank all of y'all who have been following this since the first chapter. I know this is sorta long-ish but nit-picks are ...

American: 24 Canadian: 5 English: 11 Filipino: 5 Finnish: 2 French: 2 Indian: 6 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...

I totally agree with 'zila. Jabber really needs a like button(: *likes* ~peanut~

Emily! (: I don't really have much to say about this chapter. In the other reviews I went through grammar stuff and things about the characterization (or the lack there ...

Lassie!!

Emily! Hi(: First off to make it to where it's not all scrunched up go to edit. Then there should be a thing at the bottom that says options already ...

Matt! Here as requested. First off I like the idea of this. The way I saw it the dolls were representing Jodie's family and I really liked that. But as ...

Hi, Jas! Peanut here for a review. Pain was hidden shallowly in the palms of his hands This is an interesting way to start out. I like it but it ...

Welcome to YWS(: I'm peanut or Sarah whichever you prefer! Wow..you sound like a very ambitious person and a very intelligent one. I can barely do Geometry and I'm almost ...

This story is 12 years old? Really? Wow...I'm impressed. I'm sure it's gone through a lot of revision but it's still really good. The only thing I didn't like was ...

Okay, first off: I love the last stanza! It's amazing and I think it's the best one out of all of them. I understood most of it and caught a ...