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Ummm, rainbows and smiles?? Wow newbies are lucky I never saw smileys or rainbows when I joined...... Nah it's not that bad, we won't bite, hard. Welcome to YWS Shabam. ...

Hi Squarened. I'm Peanut and I think you did creepy just fine. I liked your characters but towards the beginning Afton seemed very childish and annoying. Which I assume he ...

Hi Air. There was a lot of information that you told the reader in this page. You could tell less information to sort of spread out through more than one ...

I might do it....I didn't finish with JulNo but hopefully on Nov. 1st I will have it done and will be able to start the sequel. ~peanut~

Levan, welcome to YWS I'm sure you'll love it. I'm peanut or you can call me Sarah. So you only started writing a few months ago? Well we'll give lots ...

Hi Lukan I'm peanut. So here goes: I'm going to assume this is a prologue, but if it wasn't it's a little short. This might have just been a typo ...

Mandorelute, this is not bad. But in my opinion the Roman Numerals aren't needed they are extra and you can get your point across without them. Is this an essay? ...

Cee, I didn't see anything that was really wrong with this. It was very interesting to read. I have never read anything in 2nd person, other than instructions and would ...

I want to write a novel I have over 30k from my JulNo that I didn't finish so maybe that counts....But the ideas are disappearing and the characters are bugging ...

Thanks guys, I'm not using this story for the contest, but I was just messing with writing styles. Thank you for the reviews. ~peanut~

I'm planning on entering the Scholastic Art and Writing Awards Competition. The story I am going to submit will most likely be in this format of writing. And I need ...

Wintersmith by I don't remember who it's be by I couldn't even get through the first chapter. Twilight by Stephenie Meyer. It's not the book it's the hype and everyone ...

Jon, awesome. I could actually get what it is saying, unlike some poetry when I, some one who knows nothing, am utterly confused. Good job. I also don't know if ...

Jon, this was really good, and I feel dumb reviewing this because if there was something wrong with it I didn't see it. Like I said I don't know how ...

Okay, Eve. I liked how you retold what I was wondering about in the beginning: what happened earlier that night. But it didn't seem like a dream. I don't know ...