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Re: I was never greeted
Really? You want to know? Man, I thought people were just weird on this site and asked random questions. Oh, I guess I can answer. Just kidding I like questions. ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Reviews by a nut
I'm finished with your review, Mo, I hope I helped :) ~peanut~
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: The Last Shred of Hope
Hi Mo :) Here I am. It seems like people have already picked up on the grammatical errors in this piece so I'm going to focus on the characters. I ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: I was never greeted either! :(
Mo it looks like you like questions. So I'm going to give you the one question no one has asked yet. :twisted: Why on Earth do you like questions? Do ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: I was never greeted
I think the color's some sort of weird job thing I don't know. But it's awesome, we are like twins :) I think I'll call you Mattress, JustDance. You just ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Welcome Mat
Hi Maddy! Welcome to YWS. I saw you in chat and you already know some of the rules because we bombarded you. I get to show you the rainbow. Don’t ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: I was never greeted
I heard some where caps are bad. But who ever told me that said to always listen to the purple people. I think they are supposed to be special or ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: I was never greeted
Really? I never thought about the answer. You're the first one to try to figure it out. You should get points Moriah :) My favorite movie is A Walk To ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: I was never greeted
Hi Sarah. I'm a Greeter, the person who should have posted on here if you posted a thread when you joined. I'm going to assume you know what Greeters are ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: I was never greeted
Hi everybody! I'm Sarah! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: I like dancing elephants and writing. I write other fiction cause I'm weird and don't write things that fit in the real categories. ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Warriors: Moonhigh
Hi Cheez_burger :) Welcome to YWS. I noticed one thing in the is piece you didn't capitalize your I 's. Any time an I is by itself it has to ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Twelve Prologue and Chapter One Part One
Stella! I'm a very bad girl please torture me with more messed up princesses. Now for the actual review. I don't really have any nitpicks, no misspelled words you found ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: M.A.X
Hi Imagination :) Welcome to YWS I'm peanut. "Max, telephone!". That period is not needed if you are using the exclamation point. "Hello.". No one replied. Again the extra period ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Cry If You Must - Prologue and Chapter One
Hi Kat :) I'm glad you finally posted this. I'm going to try not to shatter it as you said. It hurt, too much. You don't need the comma after ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Forgetting the World
This story was inspired by the song Chasing Cars by Snow Patrol. I hope it's good :). Harsh reviews appreciated. ~peanut~ “Just lie down, Sissy,” I beg. She doesn’t know ...
Dec 21, 2009
