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Re: Hiya all the peoples of the world or website....
Wow I've heard a lot of people mentioning Fruits Basket. I'm not into manga but now I know it must be good. Hi Emily, I'm peanut or Sarah whichever is ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: review my work? ill review yours :)
Hi Tayla welcome to YWS, I'm peanut or any nickname that could possible come from that or Sarah. I'm sure a lot of people will love to review your work ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)
I feel like I really need to review. I want to have five stars. So that's only....like 170 more reviews give or take some.......O.o ~peanut~
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Housefly
I've watched you silently, Moving from one place to another. Letting fate dictate your route, If it is fate it wouldn't be dictated, it would just happen Every second of ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Ode to Sunday Pancakes
This was very interesting, Helpful. It was extremely creative and it made my afternoon(now I want pancakes). You used good descriptions and images to help me see these amazing pancakes. ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: You and I
This is a love poem. So I don't really know how to help you there, like June said try to stay away from cliche descriptions and images. But I did ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Removed #8
Hi tennis. A lot has already been said about your poem but I will say somethings also. I noticed that at the end you say "the game is over/checkmate." I ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Four Roses
I agree with the things about the syllable count that other people have said. I think it would help the poem flow better but it is beautiful already. You had ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: In the Crib of your Love
Hi Melvin :) I honestly can't find anything wrong with this piece. I loved the consistency of your rhyme scheme. And the imagery was lovely and very original. Although I ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: The Banners Torn
Hi Kelcia, I'm Peanut :). I noticed that the first sentence of this poem isn't punctuated but the next sentences are. You should put end marks at the ends of ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: A maiden's woe
Hi Ruby! I have to say I agree with Dreamer some of it was a little hard to read. But I think that's just because I'm not used to it. ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by a nut
Hey guys I'll have your reviews done before the 6th I promise. I'm sorry it's taking so long but I've been pretty busy. But you will get them :) ~peanut~
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Big Changes for 2010 (input needed!)
Nate the pink names are amazing you should keep them like that :) ~peanut~
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: New kid... GET HER!
Like the others I have never heard of AW. Tell me more *blinks* Welcome to YWS I for one am glad you are here *tackles* You did that to yourself, ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: YWS E-cards?
Yeah, I think it's a wonderful idea but I'm not so sure I'd be able to find a reason to use them..... ~peanut~
Dec 31, 2009