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Cheesy this was funny. Not a lot of poems are against him...I don't think. But then again I don't know if I've ever read one that wasn't against him?? Oh ...

I agree with the other posts this was a wonderful poem. I don't really have any nitpicks except there were a few lines that need commas in the middle. It ...

Hi Aery welcome to YWS! The site has changed an awful lot in the past two years, but I assure you it is still as epic as ever. So I'm ...

Jigs. This is awesome. I bow down to Snoink (don't hurt me O Evil One) but this made me laugh. It was epic and I'm glad you got into the ...

I just now noticed it was different. I like that it is like the other forums :) ~peanut~

Hi Hawk :) Please somebody heed my words, Can't anybody hear . The last line is a question it needs a question mark. To change this world forever, But how ...

Junie this poem was awesome I agree with Jon you should post more. But I do agree with Kammie. The larger words were a good effect and I think they ...

I agree with Kat about the emotion, it is amazing in this piece. Good job on that. And the full stops were sort of odd. I don't think I've ever ...

Oh, they are supposed to be ghosts? Well that changes things. Make that more clear though because just because you know that doesn't mean I do :) ~peanut~

Hi Rose. The things I saw in the poem was that it was a little hard to read. When the line breaks are like that it is a little strange ...

Hi Timmy, I'm Sarah :). First off I saw some missing commas. Five bikers , side by side, Ride out into the night. Engines revving , helmets off, Ready for ...

Hi Welcome to YWS, Marzenai! I'm peanut or Sarah and I'm glad you're here :) Looks like you're going to fit right in here. We love good reviewers and people ...

Hi Lite. I told you I'd review something if you posted it. And you are my 100th review! Yay! Haha now for the review. I thought this was a good ...

Welcome back Lynlyn. That's insane getting a letter from yourself.. Oh well good to have you back :) ~peanut~

Hi TJ! Welcome to YWS. This site is for people like you, it will really help with your writing. We have members as young a 11 so you're going to ...