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Re: Reviews by a nut
Tennisprincess, your review is done :) ~peanut~
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Removed #3
I agree with Knightley about some of the sentences. Especially the part about the bricks. It took the emotion out of that paragraph and it took me a little bit ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Mezzo Forte [1]
Well then. Raymond's just a big ball of lovely isn't he? I'm kidding. But he was rather bipolar toward that girl. Okay now for the review. Would the hangover this ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: A Drop Of Life
I'm not positive this is the right forum for this but I hope it is. The idea for this poem came from two comic strips I read online on a ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: My Guardian Angel
Eep, okay I'm a little reluctant to review this :P but I will anyway. I'm gonna be a little techincal so brace yourself. An angel above my shoulder, An angel ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by a nut
Shubhi, your review is done :) ~peanut~
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Pianissimo [2]
Jared! I can't believe no one else has reviewed this! But I have to say the length I thought was good, but it might have scared other people who hadn't ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Love the Vours part 2
The DeVouring. I love that book and will review this tomorrow. ~peanut~
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Sunny Day
Bailey, you know from what I've told you that a lot of reviews on here are harsh. You should have said something about it being a joke because we take ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Has anyones work here been published?
I'm going to be published in an anthology and I've had a poem published in Spun Yarn here on YWS (if that counts). ~peanut~
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Sunny Day
Okay, Bailey. This might seem mean but I agree with Eli and you know I'm a mean person :P The sun is out; make it go away. The bunnies hop; ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Pianissimo [1]
Jare, it's not horrible. I only saw one spot that had something that confused me and I think it was just a typo. Her husband had quite expressively told her ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Elemental Thirteen Prologue
Hi, Em :) Here's the review. First off there were a few typos. “We have gathered her today Her should be here. I know there were more, but I can't ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: This is nuts!
I haven't posted anything on here yet. Most of y'all know me but I'm gonna do this anyway. Umm...let's see...I'm 13 years old, 14 in June. My favorite color is ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: a lesson for this sunday
Your imagery never ceases to amaze me. The way you describe things is like nothing I've seen or have ever thought to describe something. I really don't have anything bad ...
Mar 20, 2010
