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Hi pencilgirl, welcome to YWS I'm peanut! I think Yuri hit on a lot of important points. And I agree that this isn't really a short story. I read it ...

Tehe me again. :) (which wasn’t completely untrue. That way if I was seen with Henri, my alibi would still stand. You are missing a set of parenthesis. I'm not ...

I know you said there was plot holes and such in this chapter but I took a look at it anyway. I hope the holes have something to do with ...

Hello again :) Unfortunately I don't have as much to say about this chapter. I loved it from the start and I love your narrator so much. He's insanely easy ...

Alrighty here I go. I'm going to try and help. To anyone else it was a setting, or a place with a settled ambience, but to me it was… something ...

Aw, the lamb is adorable! But I agree with Junie I'm getting distracted by the...what is that? The fence? The part of it in the lower left hand corner is ...

Hi Sage, welcome to YWS! I'm peanut and I'm gonna try to help with this. If she had been looking, she would have noticed it. A hazy shape, shimmering in ...

Emely! Hello again :) I know you are new to YWS and we sorta have this rule. It's a ratio so that everything is kept in balance. I'm not one ...

Hi Emely welcome to YWS! I'm gonna be reviewing your poem today :) I can't believe W h ere my thoughts are with you . I know I cant ever ...

Hi kitro. I thought this was very creative. I liked that you were talking about grass the whole time but your descriptions were so personified that the reader didn't know ...

You weren't that bad. Trust me I was way worse when I started writing poems. Ledi is a leprechaun He works from night to dawn He leaves in the morning ...

Hi Stori. I'm not really sure what to make of this. It's very short and I'm pretty sure it's apart of something bigger. I'm going to try to review this ...

Hey, Kaywiia I'm going to hit on something besides the emotion of this piece. My friend asks me. The heat from the school bus is messing with my brain, and ...

Hi Lilicia, I'm peanut :) and I'm going to try to help out with this. She looked out of her window, observing the way the plane flew across the sky ...

I only have time to review about half of this but I hope it'll help. I'm going to try to get to the rest of it tomorrow. My mom who ...