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Re: Kitties and Coloring Books
Lily! Tehe here's your review. And he had stayed inside the lines I think you mean she since it's talking about Emily. “Hannah, you do remember that you’re allergic to ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: God's Mistakes (Part 2)
Rip this part to shreds, too. I promise it won't hurt my feelings :) And I need to know if the ending is okay because I liked it but I'm ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: God's Mistakes (Part 1)
This is Part one of two. It was written for lilymoore's contest. Rip it to pieces :) ~peanut~ “Killing kids isn’t my forte, Rae, I told you that before.” Ember ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: I Love Reviewing Like a Fat Kid Loves Cake!
Lily, if you're ever really bored I have a novel in Advance Critiques that loves reviews more than fat kids love cake... ~peanut~
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
Thanks, Hope! ~peanut~
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Wake
Sierra= Low. I wasn't sure how obvious that was. I wanted to keep her nickname in there because I loved it when Jen suggested Yellow for a name. But I ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: The Critique Boutique
Suz! Do you think you could review this story for me? Thanks! Rip it to shreds :) ~peanut~
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: The Swing
JD! Hi. Okay I'm gonna try to review this but there's not much to review. I really liked it. Your short sentences sort of gave it a hectic feel. I ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Starving Poet Needs to Review!
Um, this is a short story. But it's only about 1k and I think you'll like it. Thanks, Bubble. ~peanut~
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Evi, I love you! Review for me! Thank you, Evil :) ~peanut~
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Wake
Tehe, Lily that line made me write this story. I knew that line as soon as I saw the cat prompt :) I'm glad you liked it. ~peanut~
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: The Siring (Part 2 of 2)
Lily, nice. That was totally not what I expected. I liked your characters and think you did a good job of hooking me in the first part of the story. ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Wake
“Low, just make small talk ok? Jeez everything doesn’t have to be perfect.” I stare at the clock hand and wait for the line to move. The church is littered ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Critiques Anyone? (Closed until contest critiques are done)
I'm first go me! Will you read And The Light Fades? Or like a chapter of it. It's in advanced critiques not novels. Linkage for you: Thanks Jen! ~peanut~
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Time Travel Survey
1. Where would you travel to? Um, I always wanted to go back to Salem for the witch trials. So I'd go back to 1692 2. Would you time travel ...
Jun 20, 2010
