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Re: Never Mind This.
Well...I don't think it's possible. Those positions are chosen by Nate (the head honcho) and only a few people are given them. If you work hard and show that you ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: YWS and School ~ YWS and Other Sites
Selene, if you need somebody to look at stuff I'll be happy to. Just PM it to me or post it and I'll review it :) ~peanut~
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: YWS and School ~ YWS and Other Sites
I would tell your teacher about it. Explain that it is you posting the stories online, not you taking them from a writing site. That way you can't get in ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
I've done 6 I think? It's somewhere around there but they most of them are longer and I'm really proud of them :D ~peanut~
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Shift in the Bones: Prologue
Hi Embee! There were a few times in the dialogue when it wasn't punctuated correctly. “Get away from them, Samantha,” Ace said , “Come over here, next to me.” Like ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: A Shard of Bone
Hi Blackbird! I Nitpicks: He retreats from the old woman backwards, eyes still fixed upon her. I thought this sounded odd. Maybe reword it to: He retreats backwards, away from ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Girl Without Keys
Hi Quill. I thought I'd come check this out since you reviewed my piece. It amazes me how two people can use the same picture as a prompt but write ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
I've done three... ~peanut~
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Reichkristallnacht
Hi, Em. Since this only has one review I'm not gonna hold anything back. I. NITPICKS First of all, Reichskristallnacht, is spelled with an s after the c :) “Where ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Off 315
I don't really have any experience editing poems either so this should be fun. I'm just gonna sorta review it for grammar then for the overall story of it. Here ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Fragile Little Things: Leonard's Story
I'm not really sure what this was a fan-fiction of because I had never heard of it so I can't really say much on that side of things. There weren't ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: June 27 (GMT) Will Be A Reviewing Sunday
I'm ready! *dances* ~peanut~
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Claiming Newbies, is it right or wrong?
I agree with Paladin. Maybe we could bring back the mentoring? I think it would be a good idea since the site is expanding and I'm not sure how confusing ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Wintergirls -- chilling
I've read Wintergirls and I loved it. It's one of my favorite book (I've read it twice). The way Laurie Halse Anderson writes is amazing. I loved how crossing out ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Cirque du la grammaire est ouvert officiel! (Open)
Do you think you could review my story God's Mistake? Here's the link to part two, which is what I need reviews on. In the post there's a link to ...
Jun 26, 2010
