peace

Thanks so much Kissthewitch and Suzanne for taking the time to read and review it.

Within himself, Beyond those cold indifferent eyes, Somewhere along the bitterness, Beneath his soothing lies. Between his apathetic remarks, From his molded carved face Straight through his melanchol

what's the best thing about this poem is that it's real. your words don't seem to be fabricated after 3 hours of deep thought. It sounds like you just write ...

This is amazing. Your writing is absolutely captivatingly amazing. I've spent about an hour reading this whole story and it's got me hooked. This is the best story I've read ...

Awww.... that was sweet. A bit short too, but it was concisely succinct. and even though you hate me, i'll always love you. That part didn't really flow too well ...

It was insightfully inspiring and makes you kinda wonder what life really is. I really like the general idea behind the poem but some words don't really flow. Life, a ...