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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: Have It In You

    The message of this poem is profound. It's telling the "young grasshopper" to find peace in the world and stop running. The grammar from some of the lines are incorrect. ...

    Jul 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Bathing

    I enjoyed reading this short story. I thought it was very descriptive. I felt as if I were in the beautiful bathhouse and my body was weightless and relaxed. I ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Simple Attraction

    Thank you! I will!

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Simple Attraction

    Thank you!

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Simple Attraction

    Thank you!

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Simple Attraction

    Thank you for your review and advice!

    Jun 26, 2016


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