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Re: Apart Time
Thanks for pointing out the problems that I always had with punctuation. And I know that my entire piece still need more flourish, and using proper punctuation is probably a ...
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Re: Apart Time
Thanks for such detailed review in such short time, Hannah! I understand that other readers will have a hard time try to connect with the piece. The reason why I ...
Jun 4, 2014
