passionpeace21

oh, You helped a lot and thank for that and will be waiting for your review!!

Thank you so much for your opinions on the type of point of views! I think I will give a try to the third point of view because in the ...

Thank you so much for your help! I will definitely try to improve my writing on the points you mentioned above. As you said that it really bothered that you ...

Thank you so much for your suggestions! I will definitely look into it as soon as I can and as you said that you can point out my other mistakes, ...