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Hey, thank you so much

Thank you so much. This helped a tremendous amount

Hey, bud, thank you so much. That means a lot.

Thank you so much. I edited some of the things you suggested; hopefully it's a little better now? I'll work on anything further when I have more time. Thanks for ...

This nearly made me cry. That's beautiful poetry, right there.

I would definitely appreciate that review. (This could be taken as a reminder. ;) )

Thanks, A.

Thank you so much

Thank you for the review! I purposely didn't go into great detail about the backstory behind the setting here, but I'm glad you noticed it. This story is set in ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. c: Thank you so much for the review. I'll work on that transition you mentioned in the beginning. If you'd like, I can tag ...

I've fixed some of the things you mentioned; the others I'll mess around with later. And when I have a little time, I'll definitely have to find & read "Never". ...

I think it's so awesome how you can reflect so honestly on yourself as a writer. You have a wonderful day, too!

Thank you for catching those bad transitions at the beginning! It made me cringe to read them. But they're fixed! I'm not sure about the imagery in some of my ...

Hi! Thank you for the review! The lines you mentioned specifically just had to do with the fact that the narrator went to great lengths to please this other person. ...