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Re: The man who sells ice cream has a cold (and other limericks)
Hey, Just a few things! 1. It's Paddys day! Not "Patty's" day. Patty is a womans name! I'm from Ireland, I should know! As a matter of fact I come ...
Mar 17, 2007 -
Re: Holocaust
Kane & Abel- ever read it? Because I think you have. Did you actually intend for this poem to shock, to perturb the reader deeply, to leave them in a ...
Mar 14, 2007 -
Re: The Shadow (chapeter 1 Will)
There were a lot of problems with that story, and to highlight them all would be tiring. So I'm just going to say: WATCH YOUR GRAMMER and PUNCTUATION. Best selling ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Sitting/Beauty
Sitting. I liked this poem, it was short, simplistic and meaningful and the measure was spot on. Quatraine, Cinquaine or whatever other aine there is poems usually don't appeal to ...
Feb 19, 2007