parisanmilo

thank you guys! (: hahah i haven't checked back in so long. i did consider this one of my okay poems, not very good... but i'll revise it (: thanks ...

heyy(: thanks guys :D how's this: C igarettes and Men alike, easily does she discard them A fter bewitching, seducing, fatale est la femme R eels them in, and spits ...

Just wanted to point something out. You jumped into the story without introducing the character at all. uhh... is it necessary?

yea, totally thanks (:

the quoted parts are indents, couldnt find any.

*if not then uhh.. what type of poem is this? oh and uhh the structure's a bit weird (if it's supposed to be a type of poem [structure-wise]}