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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 11.2
True, it's easier but I ALWAYS find a couple of mistakes, even on the hundredth revision.
Aug 16, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 11.2
Happens. You're working on your story, you realize you made a huge mistake but you need to reread everything just for tiny, bitsy references so you just go on, thinking ...
Aug 16, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 11.2
Haha, tonight probably. I was taking a holiday with my very demanding girlfriend. She says she is getting jealous of my computer so I'm trying to tone it down.
Aug 16, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 12.1
I thought wizards couldn't touch the sword?
Aug 15, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 9.2 - The accomplice
Yep. I do that too, even when I'm writing in French. I will try to find a good English one.
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 3.2 - Step into my parlor (Warning, Russ's POV)
Thanks for the advice. 'Good girl' is kind of Russ's creepy catch-phrase. But it sort of creeps me out now when I read it in books. Like, it's supposed to ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 12.1 - Dead as the Sea
That's the downside of naming puppies when they are too young to have shown their personality. My dad solved that problem. My dog's name is 'Chien' (that's literally 'dog' in ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 14.2 - Smells like honeymoon (seven years ago)
I know I need to focus more on description. :D I really love my characters so I've a tendency to focus on what they're saying and thinking and to forget ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 15.1 - Stars in the Lockit Galaxy
I so love those two.
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 2.2 - Taking a running start (seven years before)
I think it's more that Viggo is being dismissive of his sisters than anything else. You aren't the first one to tell me that I need to better describe my ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 3.1 - Step into my parlor (Warning, Russ's POV)
Thanks. And here I was, after reading your last review, thinking that no, you probably didn't want to get to know Russ better...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 9.2 - The accomplice
Thanks. Since I'm still learning English, I probably make a lot of those mistakes. It's always useful to have them pointed out to me.
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.1 - Like a dog with a bone
Hi, there is a dog simply because I needed something to create an open conflict between those two, and it's a dog because I love dogs. My family always had ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.1 - #RememberNyssa
I know, right? I just love a good frameup. I'm one of those really perverse people. I keep thinking up ways to disguise a murder in an accident, a suicide ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.2 - #RememberNyssa
Good point. I'm not sure that she actually is asexual. Maybe she is trying very hard to convince herself that she is. I have a very good friend who went ...
Jun 25, 2017
