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I meant, "As for putting a bleeding dog in an ideally 'germ-free' zone, ughhh..."

It helps a lot. It's interesting that you were confused at the end. I want the reader not to be too sure at this point. But does the end of ...

Once again, thanks for the review. Russ had it coming, believe me. Don't be sorry.

I hope you read it! I feel very good about this story. It's probably more your tastes. Plus, I'm really proud because I think my English is getting better. And ...

It's a flashback, and it's one of the last chapters, so it's not surprising that you're a little confused. The chapter is in need of some rewriting however, I agree. ...

Thanks, it's definitely going to be helpful when I re-write this chapter. I definitely hadn't noticed the pronoun issue. As for Angela being a little flat, I agree, but I ...

Ok, I've got three things to say in answer. First, thanks for Scruffy, I'll think about its gender. I think I'm the kind of person who would call her dog ...

Oh, thank you for the advice. It's definitely going to help me go over my draft again. As for Russ's death, I KNOW. Plus, I didn't want Viggo to get ...

I agree. But whatever I made him do, it would have been too much or too little, depending on the reader. I did my best :)

A June Gloom, shaken, not stirred.

Wow, I didn't know that. June Gloom sounds like a great name for a cocktail, though.

Thanks for the review. I'll notify you, of course. I hope you enjoy the story. Don't sacrifice too many insects on my account.

It was another typo, sorry. Thanks for catching it. There will probably be a few of those. I've written everything by hand and I'm typing it just to post it, ...

Thank you for the review. Sorry, it was definitely a typo. Thanks for spotting it. I'm almost done with chapter 2. I'll publish it in a few days when I've ...

Well, maybe one day we will have a "Tayllerand" musical. It would be nice actually, 19th century European politics were fascinating.