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Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 17.1 - Something Good
Thanks. I never told you but it was reassuring to hear. Frankly, I had trouble writing about sex. Every time I went back over it, I could hear my grandmother's ...
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Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
I did it! Now, talk about a long wait...But I'm finally done with revising!
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.1 - #RememberNyssa
Re-reading reviews today. Did you watch "Gone Girl"? I finally got around to it and, if you didn't, boy oh boy, you need to. It was hilarious.
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 13 - Karma is a bitch (Russ's POV)
Flores didn't. ;)
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 12.2 - Dead as the Sea
I was writing yesterday and I didn't know if the verb I was looking for was "racking" or "wracking". It reminded me of this review :D And don't get me ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.1 - Like a dog with a bone
I decided to keep the dog in the end the way he was. I needed him to wrap up the story. I agree that it feels a little abrupt but ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.2 - Like a dog with a bone
Sorry, I never thanked you for the review. It helped to have feedback about their relationship. It's always hard to decide whether you've got enough or not enough when it ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 8.2 - Comparing mouths and playing dolls (seven years ago)
Sorry, I never thanked you for your review. It helped a lot.
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 7.2 - Pizza, sex and tit for tat
Sorry, I never did thank you for the review. So, kind of late, thank you.
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 1.1 - I think the Earth moved
Sorry, I never did do it. I was still getting used to the website. I've published the entire story now.
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 1.1 - I think the Earth moved
Thank you.
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 1.1 - I think the Earth moved
I never got around to thanking you. Sorry. I've published the entire story now.
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 1.1 - I think the Earth moved
Maybe the blue eyes...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 2.1 - Taking a running start
Hi, if you're still interested, I finished making corrections and I published a finished version on amazon. Just search "Run Free", Amelie Delbon. If you could leave a review, that ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 34.1
Kiernan is back! Kiernan is back! I can't believe it. Kiernan is back! Also, I don't have much to say about this chapter, so I'll hold off on the review ...
May 6, 2018
