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Again, not going to call it a review. It's much too short. But I think you'd do your story a service shortening this chapter. Too little happens, I think you ...

Hi, here I am, back again to review a couple of chapters. I intended to review only chapter 44 originally, but then, I was going to stick to the same ...

Hi, I’m back to review chapter forty-three, parts one and two, except I'm not going to call it a review because it's so short and I've got so little to ...

Hi, back to review chapter 42, parts 1 and 2. You really have great timing: talk about Clem, get Clem, talk about Kiernan and the pit, get Kiernan and the ...

Hi, another short review, this one for chapter 41. Let me start out with a nitpick, because it’s really tiny, and it’s pretty much the only one: I don’t like ...

Hi again, chapter 40 now. It’s a short review because I didn’t have that much to say. Perfect transition from chapter 39. Talk about Clem, then, bam, see Clem. And ...

Hi, So, at long last, chapter thirty-nine reviewed. I’m reviewing 39.1 and 39.2 together, so I’ll have enough material. So, the action is picking up. You know what I really ...

Hi, there. I'm trying to write a review about this chapter, but I really don't have that much to say. It's a good companion to the one with Clem, even ...

OMG! When Stuff starts to Happen with you, stuff really does happen! I can’t believe Clem did that. It’s an action-packed chapter. I really liked it. I liked the action, ...

Hi, it’s Papillote dropping in for a quick review. I’m going to start with the critics and, then, move on to the good things. First, and it’s maybe the most ...

Hi, I’ve decided to pop in for a review. English isn’t my first language, so I’ll focus on the story rather than nitpicking about grammar and conjugation (if it’s readable, ...

Yay !!!! Stuff happens and…Kiernan !!!! First, let me tell you: it was weird seeing the exact same battle from his perspective. Especially when Jo went down. I like Jo, ...

Wow. I guess Stuff Happened. Wow. I really liked how you managed to stay consistent to your characters’ personalities even in the midst of all the action. Yes, Benjamin cursed, ...

Before I dive into this chapter’s review, there is something I forgot to tell you about the chapter before this one. I’m so curious to know why Kiernan stared that ...

Overall, I liked this chapter, but I didn't love it. I had a couple of small issues, a big one and tons of tiny bits I loved. Okay, the little ...