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Hey, thanks for your thoughts on the story!

Thanks for the review! You're right, in my next draft I'll definitely be giving the kid more specific characteristics (including probably a name). The avoiding specifics was a bit of ...

Hey, thanks for the review! Sorry it took me so long to reply. I'll keep your advice in mind when editing. If I were to rewrite this without a word ...

Aw, thanks! That's what I love about poetry, trying to fit big ideas into little words and images. And actually, Blue Beech is a type of tree that's common in ...

Hey there, thanks for such a kind review! I've never heard of Rabindranath Tagore, I'll have to learn more about him because he sounds really interesting! You're right that it's ...

Thank you for pointing out so many specific things! I'll definitely think about those when editing (and I'm for sure editing this one). The "so alive" thing wasn't conscious, but ...

Thanks for the review! I'm definitely going to be editing this, so I'll be sure to think about rephrasing the "things" line, I think you're right about it feeling more ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that you liked the formatting, it was really fun trying to find the right place for it to give the desired ...

Thanks for the review! What exactly is it about the line you quoted that you find boring, or wearying? Looking back, I can see that it is definitely the most ...

Hey, thanks for the review! My intention with the odd formatting, apart from just playing around to see how odd I could make it and still have it make sense, ...

Hey, thanks! :)

Hey, thanks so much for the critiques! I'll definitely keep them in mind when editing - looking back, I realize that I didn't know what the poem's main images/metaphors were ...

Hi! Thanks for the review and reassurance, the more I see of YWS the more I realise what a great place it is! "this one" refers to the magician mentioned ...

Hey, thanks for the review! The lack of punctuation was a stylistic thing that's become a habit for me, so I didn't even think about that - thanks for bringing ...