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Can you hear her crying Crying in the dark Can you hear her whisper Pouring out her heart You disgust me Though I shouldn't judge The way you treat her ...

I really liked your poem. I could relate to it, but I got confused. I didn't exactly understand why you used all of the, excuse the term, "old" words, for ...

Thanks so much all of you. I'll keep trying! Yours truly, Cally

Oh yes, and thank you Suzanne for the help and suggestions. I really appreciate tips on how I can improve my poetry. Thank you honestly, Mikaela (Cally)

Thank you blacktiger3915 and justin5676. You totally just made me feel very happy inside. I would appreciate, instead of you just bashing my three year old poetry, you actually give ...

Thanks so much, I REALLY (in caps as to show appreciation not sarcasm. Honestly.) appreciate this. I'm very... how can I put it? I'm very slow(?)... when it comes to ...

What if we had a song? Could we? Would you let me? Would you except me for who I am? What if I held you? And I never let go ...

I liked it *Big thumbs up* It was very creative and not entirely my fault that I got distracted by the shape it makes. I'm not saying that I was ...

Hello, I like your poem a lot, and it's not just because it reminds me of Johnny Depp. Anyways, you use great word choice very well. Everything fit well together ...

Catcher took a deep breath and closed her eyes. She willed her fangs to come out of her mouth but they wouldn’t come. “Damian. They’re stuck.” He laughed lightly. “They’re ...

Hey, I like your poem. It has a good rhythm and I know what you're going for. I got a little off when you repeated "Walking in a circular motion." ...

Thank you so much! I will write a poem, actually I think I have, about the bad feelings from the summer before. It's actually quite an interesting story. I'm sorry ...

Hey, I like your poem, especially about the idea of death's dance. Which is basically the whole thing. Anyways, I like the way you describe the dancing and the movements, ...

Words flowing from the tip of my pen Sentances played out in my mind The perfect weather The perfect time Inspiration flowing from every hole Every blade of grass Drifting ...

Hello, I liked your poem a lot. I can relate to it, well, not exactly, but at least I know what you mean. Besides the part that everyone says, "Vain ...