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xXTheBlackSheepXx: Thanks for your feedback! You've no idea how much it means : ) I've never tried a comedy before, so I'm really glad that it made at least one ...

Thanks for your critique! I really appreciate it! But, sadly, this means I messed up pretty badly when I wrote it because I wasn't trying to make it look Sarai ...

Amon- Thank you so much! You've been a great help since the beginning and I'm really grateful :D As for the things you pointed out, I'll go back and edit ...

Thanks to all of you guys for the reviews! I'm really happy to get such great feedback and I'll work on the things you all mentioned. Thanks again :3

LadyFey-Thanks so muh for pointing out those things. It's one of my bad habits and I probably wouldn't have caught them otherwise^^; Amon360-Thanks a lot for the advice. I was ...

Seraphania- Thanks so much for the little grammar mentions. It's one of my worst habits and I'm really glad you pointed them out to me. I probably wouldn't have noticed ...

Thanks Mr.Blink :3 I went back and changed the things you pointed out and I think I fixed most of my mistakes :D

Phew. I was afraid I would have made it worse^^ I'll work on the excess details and repeating myself. Thanks again for the review!

Thanks a lot for the review^^ It really helped clarify some of the things I was thinking about. And I'll definitely work on my over-description, which sadly, is one of ...

Wow. Thanks for all of the input. I really appreciate it :D Most of what you said are things I completely over-looked and I obviously need to go back and ...