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Hi there! Here's what I found: Nitpicks: First: He laughed and gave me his schedule. I stared down at it. We had three classes together, including science, which happened to ...

This is the first part of my story "Weavers". It's actually one of my most favorite things that I've worked on and I think it's probably one of the best ...

Hi! Well, there really isn't much here to review so sorry if this is pretty short. I have always gotten ahead of myself, to get to the exciting stuff you ...

Seraphania- Thanks so much for the little grammar mentions. It's one of my worst habits and I'm really glad you pointed them out to me. I probably wouldn't have noticed ...

Hi there! First off, welcome to YWS! Just so you know, your supposed to do two reviews for every one of your own posts. But, that technicality aside, let's see ...

Here's something I started a long time ago but never really finished. It wasn't until recently that I finally got re-inspired and brought it out of it's premature hibernation. In ...

Thanks Mr.Blink :3 I went back and changed the things you pointed out and I think I fixed most of my mistakes :D

Hi ^_^ Here's what I noticed: Nitpicks: First: It hung just short of the center of the clear blue sky, awakening Ward Four their slumber You forgot to add 'from' ...

Frist off, wow. This was really amazing. I loved you descriptions. But like Cat_910 said, it was kinda short so this isn't going to be most detailed of reviews. First: ...

So here's what I came up with for next part of Trick. I tried to to follow along with the advice I'd gotten on the last part, but I may ...

Hello! litte tin fish covered most of what I saw, so I really only have one thing to add: “Rosa, let’s making a deal. She can stayed up and listens ...

Phew. I was afraid I would have made it worse^^ I'll work on the excess details and repeating myself. Thanks again for the review!

Hi again! First off, I think you did another great job. There were only a few things I noticed and most of those were talked about GryphonFledgling so sorry if ...

Hi! Good job on this. I really liked it^^ The few things I noticed: Her mom fussed, shrill, overbearing voice coming out of the phone in annoying bursts You forgot ...

Wow. I really liked this piece^^ I think you did a great job, so this isn't going much of a criticism sorry. Anyway, on to what I did notice: It ...