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Re: Phoenix Saga Chapter 2 Healer
Hi! Sorry it took me soo long to get to this but I haven't had the chance until now. But, here I am now so let's see what you got ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:
Hi! I was hoping you could review this for me :3 Title : Weavers Ch 3 Genre: Fantasy Summary: Emily comes from a family of assassins tgifted with magic.She herself ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: The Critic
Hi! I was hoping you could review this for me :3 Title : Weavers Ch 3 Genre: Fantasy Summary: Emily comes from a family of assassins gifted with magic.She herself ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Hi :D I was hoping you could review this for me if you dont mind Title : Weavers Ch 3 Genre: Fantasy Summary: Emily comes from a family of assassins ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Phoenix Saga Chapter 1 Ethan Tucker
Hey Amon! Frist off, great story. At first, it seemed a bit cliche but the whole thing with Veronica fixed that and really captured my attention. Plus, the whole creepy ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Weavers Ch 3
Amon- Thank you so much! You've been a great help since the beginning and I'm really grateful :D As for the things you pointed out, I'll go back and edit ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Weavers Ch 3
Here's part three. I know that the story's been pretty slow so far, but bear with me. The exciting stuff's coming up soon (hopefully X3) so all of your patience ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Hey! I'm new :)
Hi Confusion! I really adored what you wrote. It was very well written for some who doesn't think they write well :3 Basically, I'm here to say pretty much the ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: The Eulogy & The Keeper: Chapter 1
First off, wow. This was amazing. I really couldn't find that many errors at all. Here are the few ones that I did though: One: It has come to this ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Weavers Ch 1
Thanks to all of you guys for the reviews! I'm really happy to get such great feedback and I'll work on the things you all mentioned. Thanks again :3
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: monodeamon
First off, amazing work! I really enjoyed reading this. Here are the few things I noticed though: Nitpicks: One: no human would understand me, yet somehow, i have to love ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Little Green Men
Well, I'm not sure if you want any nitpiks since you're not going to revise this, but I'm going to add them in just in case K? Nitpicks: There aren't ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Weavers Ch 2
LadyFey-Thanks so muh for pointing out those things. It's one of my bad habits and I probably wouldn't have caught them otherwise^^; Amon360-Thanks a lot for the advice. I was ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Weavers Ch 2
So here's the second part of Weavers. Sorry it took me so long to put it out, but I had a bad case of writer's block. I hope this part ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Lycanthropy: Post #1
Hi! K, here's what I noticed: One: It was warm summer night when I saw my first Lycan. I was working in my dad’s pub helping clean up after everyone ...
Jan 16, 2009
