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xXTheBlackSheepXx: Thanks for your feedback! You've no idea how much it means : ) I've never tried a comedy before, so I'm really glad that it made at least one ...

So, this is what I'm working on for NaNoWriMo this year. As usual, I'm seriously behind on my word count, but instead of catching up I decided to spend some ...

Hi there : ) Really great chapter! I found a couple of mistakes, though, and since you've already gotten pretty detailed responses on your plot from other reviewers, I'll just ...

Hi Leahweird : ) Great story! I just have a couple of grammar mistakes to point out: Although he felt he would be more comfortable with an actual destination in ...

This is a godsend, I swear. Thanks so much Dr. Wicked and tiny tin fish for this. I think you two just made my chance of surviving this month go ...

Hi! First off, this was amazing! I really loved it. You had so much depth in here and the way you presented everything was brilliant. Alas, I did find some ...

Thanks for your critique! I really appreciate it! But, sadly, this means I messed up pretty badly when I wrote it because I wasn't trying to make it look Sarai ...

I just came up with this for a contest I was thinking about entering (Fairies and Elves: tales of magic and myth) but I've never entered one before so I'm ...

Hey Micman! Here's what I've got to say after reading your piece: First: I'm sorry to say that, after scrolling down to check the length of this story, I nearly ...

I'm in! But I'll probably forget and come late :3

This is the first time I've ever done a AC so I'm not sure if I did it right sorry :? I put any nitpicks I found throughout the story ...

all honesty, I thought this was fantastic. Really, one of the best short story romances I've read in a long time. Congrats! :D Here's the stuff I really struggled to ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS :3 If you need anything, feel free to ask okay? Anyway, here's what I've got: I couldn’t look at her or anyone. This is just me, ...

Hi! First off, I'm really sorry that I dont have any criticisms to offer ^^; It's not my habit to just offer praises without at least some advice, but I ...

This is what I came up with for the next chapter. Following some of the advice I got earlier, I changed some things around and am really happy where this ...