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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cliched Heartbreak

    The second line in the first verse makes no sense to me. did you add a word that wasn't suppose to be there or mix words up? and i also ...

    Dec 5, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You're Not There

    I very much enjoyed your poem. The way that things were said made it seem that yourworld was that window. to improve some visual and descriptive parts can be incorporated ...

    Dec 5, 2007


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19