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Re: The Life of a Broken Girl [R]
November 9 Hello diary today is a day of misery. My first entry in you is one of heartache and distress. My name is Christina Marie Fitzpatrick and last night/this ...
Dec 5, 2007 -
Re: Cliched Heartbreak
The second line in the first verse makes no sense to me. did you add a word that wasn't suppose to be there or mix words up? and i also ...
Dec 5, 2007 -
Re: You're Not There
I very much enjoyed your poem. The way that things were said made it seem that yourworld was that window. to improve some visual and descriptive parts can be incorporated ...
Dec 5, 2007 -
Re: Hey
Hi every one, my name is Jacki and I am 18 and love writing. I am a freshamn in college at Northern Illinois University and my minor is creative writing. ...
Dec 5, 2007
