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I actually like your ryhming scheme here, though it does seem a bit experimental. Think about it, orange ryhmes with no other one word. It kind of sounds like hinge, ...

Yay! This reminds me of a classic script. The people you really think are crazy are really the ones who are right. Reminds me of great works, like "A Wrinkle ...

To Hawkie: I always have songs that end up sounding like Taylor Swift songs. But I think I aim to be a little more angsty than her. A little less ...

Wow, this picture is amazing! For the most part your skill in drawing correct proportions and your shading ability is great for only seventeen years old. The only thing I'd ...

I'd have to agree with most everyone here. It's a little bit too short to give a good critique, but if you keep working on it, there will be a ...

Well, I'm late in commenting, but I relate to this play so much, so I have to comment somehow. You basically touched every feeling we bipolar and hormonal teens face ...

Seems the only way I can clear my head these days, Is to write it on a piece of paper. Because it's all the things that I can't say, But ...

Honestly, the way you described the situation is amazing. It's unbelievably passionate with sadness and I can even feel the strong sense of anger and frustration with in the words. ...

I'd have to agree with the first two. I do believe that there were some weak points in the poem where it was cliche, but what I've learned is that ...

Well, as you can tell because I'm posting here, I'm Emily, and I'm basically new here. I used to visit here once in my thirteen years, but that was before ...