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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Boxing

    thanks for all the reviews guys, was nice to read. On the whole use of the words "prick" and "fuck," boxers actually do talk like that in Australia. I can't ...

    Oct 3, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)

    I don't really appreciate you telling the writer what she should especially ignore out of my review. She can do what she pleases with a story, and I can tell ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: abandonment

    Thanks, was nice to get your opinion. I think I get your point about needing to suggest that Luke has changed somehow, I sort of hint at it but its ...

    Sep 27, 2009


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