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Good story so far, I reckon continue it, after all it can't hurt. I liked the hints about Knox abusing goblins, you left it to the readers imagination which was ...

Hey, this story is pretty good. I really liked the voice of the narrator, edgy agressive, it was good. I really like how the narrator gets to work, its a ...

Good story, I liked the first sentence, it set the scene and made me interested. It is a little confusing at the end, does the devil pretend to be the ...

Hey guys, first draft so really would REALLY appreciate any comments/criticism/ideas. It is a whole story, not just a first chapter in case there is any confusion. 3,500 words, but ...