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  • abandonment

    Hey guys, first draft so really would REALLY appreciate any comments/criticism/ideas. It is a whole story, not just a first chapter in case there is any confusion. 3,500 words, but ...

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  • Boxing

    Any comments appreciated, 1,500 words. Once again this is a whole story not a beginning.The guy was big, bigger than he’d thought, bigger than he’d been told. As he shook ...

    9 min read
  • echoes through time

    Little more action packed than my other stories, 1,700 words.He saw them waiting for him as he walked up the stairs to his flat. He thought about running, down the ...

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