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  • Other Poetry Re: Our wild Night

    THank you guys it was one of my old poems thanks ALOT!

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Understand

    this is too short to really tell a story of what happens but it leaves space fro the mind to wander it gives you space to paint the rest of ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Spite

    I can truly sympathize with this poem the title honestly goes great with poem it's awesome i can feel the emotion it would've been great to have known who was ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Bed, Pure

    if only some people had read this poem before getting married it was great but i think you could've added a little more to the pain that the woman was ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I'm Still Smirking

    very short and stragiht to the point it speaks of defiance and determination o like it

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Say My Name

    well I've never seen anyone do poetry from inside the mind of an animal of any kind it's very unique and pretty cute and i like how you are able ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Not a home

    i barely got it but i kinda caught the gist that he poem was actually a narration from inside the mind of a killer. it was great but a little ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Our wild Night

    I gasp in Delight; as were playing tonight. i Moan and i groan My heart races to places unknown. I cringe in despair; cuz you're not playing fair. The gods ...

    Jan 29, 2011


If you can't describe what you are doing as a process, you don't know what you're doing.
— W. Edwards Deming