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I really like this poem it is sweet and straight to the point it reminds me of another one of my poem "reborn!" IT IS REALLY GREAT TO SEE OTHERS ...

Thank you i will and when i do please review!

Love is a risk-is it one worth taking? If I fall in love what about my heart, what are the chances of it breaking? Is anyone worth the effort- for ...

My story is nearing completion; I will soon be back as I was, I’m almost finished with fables, for I’ll now announce I’m a mermaid,Though I said I was a ...

My story is nearing completion; I will soon be back as I was, I’m almost finished with fables, for I’ll now announce I’m a mermaid,Though I said I was a ...

Thank You guys very much for the constructive criticism Keep up the honesty!

Always heard of love but never experienced it. Is there such a thing as true love; or is only a myth? Is it for real? or is it the figment ...

You surely got your point across. i loved this this was truly emotional. great poem i loved how it was effective with the rhyme scheme, great job!

Are you crazy? (no pun intended) this was awesome especially seeing as though you just wrote it as a writer dome of our greatest pieces come int he spur of ...

Persephoneia basically seemed to point out all of the errors i think that you could've used more sensory words to make the villain in this piece seem more a villain ...

I absolutely loved this poem i am going to put it on my reading list. I loved how you were able to express yourself even though you used a rhyming ...

the piece is rather short i don't particularly get anything from it because the title does say instructions and i don't see any. We must be very careful when choosing ...

Razcoon has pretty much outlined all of your faults all in all it was a pretty good poem although you lost me the first three stanza's or so kinda contradicts ...

Besides the thing that Kafkaescence pointed out i like how you didn't directly say what the poem was speaking about. it made the poem that more interesting. and when you ...

i have three words that can sum up how i feel about those piece 'i loved it'. i liked how you conveyed the narrator's emotions.