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  • Lyric Poetry Re: life

    Hey, moonstar! :wink: I really like your poem. It has so much depth, and it really makes you think about life and death and all that jazz. Other than a ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Perfect

    My first post! Woo! review Bright red blood is everywhere. Blood, there's so much blood. I open my mouth to scream but nothing comes out. I hadn't meant to cut ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hit the Black

    Wow. That was amazing! I loved it. You should really consider publishing it. I was immediately wrapped up in the story and now I want to read more! You make ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Thanks, tnme22!

    :D Thanks for giving me some tips! I feel so loved! And no, i am not an online predator so you can rest at ease. To answer your questions, 1.) ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: New here. And I could be you mother for all you know . . .

    Okay. I don't know if you will get the chance to read this or if i was supposed to pm you but I'm posting this! Thanks for taking the time ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled

    Howdy! :D I really liked your story; it was interesting and left me wanting more! I liked your story, but was confused like the other reviewers. I have faith in ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: (under construction)

    That was amazing. I want to read more! You made the President such a lively character that I can picture every description of him. I like how you described the ...

    Jun 16, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: New here. And I could be you mother for all you know . . .

    Hello to all who were ingeniously dawn to my . . . whatever this is. I don't really know. Well, you were drawn to this because I'm just that cool ...

    Jun 16, 2009


Look, a good poem is a poem that exists. Any poem you write is better than the poem you don't.
— WeepingWisteria