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Okay, so there's more to this story, more in the beginning, but I didn't want to post it because it's literally pages long. I was laughing when we pulled into ...

Okay, nitpicks first. :smt002 The bag of onion rings seemed to just fall out of my hands as my fingers sloppily moved around the key board. As I continued my ...

Thanks, Howler!

So this is my first post in a long time! I'm glad I've actually had time to write. Please tell me what you think, and ways to improve my writing! ...

First off, I want you to know that I love your avatar. I am a ninja, and have the utmost respect for others. Now to the review. While the writing ...

Thank you Adriana, too! You were the first to review my work, and for that I am eternally gratefull!! I've been trying to write more with this, but it just ...

First, thank you all for reviewing my piece! I appreciate a lot! asxz: Thanks for thoroughly reviewing Perfect . How else can I learn how to write better? I liked ...

Hi, again. I loved it, no surprise to me. I think the same thing I said in my last review will go for here, too. So, I'm not going to ...

I liked the plot a lot. DO NOT GIVE UP. That is not a request! I really want to know what happens next, and I am planning on reading chapter ...

I like it. I like it a lot. I don't think anything needs to be changed. It's very descriptive, but at the same time, kind of vague. It could happen ...

Okay, just so you know, my bold, itallics, and spell check (It checks in spanish) are not working. I have no idea how to fix it. I know I can't ...

My first poem! I know it's not that great, but I think it's the best of my poems. Yeah, they aren't very good either. And just so you know, I ...

You've got talent, that's for sure, but I was really confused. I saw in the post menu where you said it was a metaphorical journey through high school, and that ...

I liked your story. It was very intriguing and left me wanting to read more. There were a few mistakes with grammar an such, i.e. missing commas, run-on sentences, missing ...

Okay. Overall, I really enjoyed your story. It has a nice plot and now I want to know what happens next. But there are a few mistakes. Your grammar needs ...